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Post by goldendragon on Jun 12, 2017 17:48:04 GMT -6
Just wondering if I can get any feedback on my RP for the PPV. I had a hard time coming up with something and some sort of development for the RP and character. Just wanted to see what everyone thought of it and the direction its heading.
Thanks, Eric
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Post by - on Jun 12, 2017 19:10:31 GMT -6
It's not the quantity that counts, its the quality. Even though yours was not the longest rp, it definitely had captivating content. The way you used the story, it showed the creativity you have. There really isn't a lot to critique here, but I will say it would be in your best interest to write a longer quality story. Because even though your rp was great, and it didn't leave me hanging, I still wanted to see more. Great job and congrats on winning!
Also, I would like to request you give me feedback on my last Joker RP at kOH as well, please!?
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Post by Earl Lockyer on Jun 12, 2017 19:28:01 GMT -6
Obviously, my rp wasn't that great considering Earl's Quick exit from the chamber match, Dahlia had a good showing though.
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Post by goldendragon on Jun 12, 2017 19:57:25 GMT -6
Thanks for the feedback Joker, will gladly give you some feedback, should have a chance to read it and give my feedback tomorrow.
As for the length I was short on time and knew I wouldn't have access to a PC frida-sunday as I was out of town for a mtg tournament so I admit I did wrap it up quick.
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